i say that i'm sorry about doing things backward
but i'm sort of not
because look at you
and look at me
and look at who we once were
the difference makes it worthwhile
this will probably be a surprise
to everyone
but us
i still have a lingering hope
i'm telling it to go away
because
at the very least
i think eventually we
can be
that cheesy cliché
the one i hate to hear
because really
when you think about it
we're sort of kindred spirits anyway
You should put that to guitar music, that would make a catchy song with the right background. You would need to turn some of it into a refrain, though.
ReplyDeleteGuitar music? I wouldn't know where to begin.
ReplyDelete:P It doesn't have to be hard. I picture it sounding like that "Hey there Delila" song. Acoustic
ReplyDeletei don't play the guitar
ReplyDeleteYou go to college. Take a class! I did. It's fun
ReplyDeletewow - how do you write poetry ??
ReplyDeleteHow? I have no idea, I just do. Really, it's just scrambled thoughts arranged into words and lines.
ReplyDeleteTiffy I love this poem very much!
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